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All Deviations
All Deviations


This line so white, the feelings grand,
Take me to another land.

A hit or two, another day,
hope it takes my mind away.

Take a shot, take 10 more,
don't stop till you cant find the door.

This bottle empty, the stomache bleeds,
finding more to help my needs.

I hear sirens, come inside,
no more time to run and hide.

Never sober, never feel,
nothing left that makes me real.

Whats one more, stick it in,
the ride to rehab will soon begin.

I can't stop, you don't care,
thats why you won't take me there.

If I live, if I die,
I don't think that you would cry.

Take my hand, one last time,
while I pay for this crime.

The only words, I want to hear,
One last whisper of "I love you dear"

Pack my bags, I'll soon be gone,
Off to rehab don't know how long,

One last kiss, so when I go,
Just confirm what we think we know,

I'm so sorry, I wasn't right,
One last binge for the night.

Don't you cry, don't feel bad,
I destroyed what I once had.

Soon enough, I'll be gone,
Yet I know you'll carry one,

Just one thing before I go,
I'll always miss you, that I know.

Good bye good bye, don't shed a tear,
Its only me that won't be here....
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yeah...well maybe someday, but not today...one more forgotten night, even if I am alone...
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*BIJOU2626:iconBIJOU2626: Feb 6, 2008, 2:33:46 PM
i like it

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~Drake-Shakespeare:iconDrake-Shakespeare: Feb 6, 2008, 2:48:08 PM
Thank you! I'm glad that at least someone seems to like my writing haha!
*BIJOU2626:iconBIJOU2626: Feb 6, 2008, 3:10:43 PM
Oh cmon... lol... i think many do...lol.. (depends if they are not to lazy to read it...) :) keep it up.

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~Drake-Shakespeare:iconDrake-Shakespeare: Feb 6, 2008, 7:03:47 PM
Haha, yeah...lazy...lol. I'll definately try to keep it up, don't you worry about that!